Black Sun - Cave Scene

For this I was just kind of looking at how well my new comic style cats fit into a real comic page so excuse the coloring. This is just a sample, I don't actually plan on doing most of Black Sun!
I went to the boards, chose a random page, random post and random paragraph to base this on. Unfortunately, outsiders will not quite grasp what is going on here without an intro:

Patchpaw is in the process of running ahead and making all kinds of ruckus; her loud noises are causing the cave/mine to collapse. She realizes this and calls for the others to hurry. The others freeze in fear, Blitzburn states the obvious and in their panic, Shinglepaw drops the two-leg light thing that they were carrying. They all follow the sounds of Patchpaw's calling and there in front of them is the exit to their doom. At the end, Ghost notices that Shinglepaw has cut herself on the two-leg thing and is falling behind.

I plan to do these with some sort of painter software when I get it installed. My pencils certainly can't handle this kind of crazy lol. I do have a tablet though! Thanks Leah! ^^